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Thursday, January 27, 2011

Texas Tech ID

Sorry about the pixelation of the text, did most of the work in Fireworks,
then tried to do final tweaks in Paint.net,
which resulted in pixelation, will be fixed when i revise it.

Well ladies and gentlemen, here is my first attempt at redesigning the Tech ID. I say first attempt because I will sure be re—doing this again before the final, because by then I hope to have improved my image editing skills.

On to the main event! Here we have a attempt at fixing the current Tech ID. I have mentioned the problems with it in a previous post, but will go over it here.

Contrast – The first thing I noticed while looking at the ID, was the fact that it had two different fonts, one for Texas Tech, and the other for the three other lines of text. To fix that, I reproduced it all in Times New Roman, since I could not get the original font. I also used the same colors on the whole card, since they create a natural contrast that attracts a reader’s attention to it.

Repetition – Colors! This was the easiest thing to do, since Texas Tech uses a great combination, black, red, and white. It was incredibly easy to create this repetition because all the logos, texts, and background use the three colors, creating an incredible unity on the product.  Initially I had just a red background, but my roommate suggested I keep the wave in the id, but change the colors to black and red. This allowed for an increased repetition, to go with the logos included in the id.

Alignment – In a previous post, I explained the alignment problems.  There are three things that were aligned well, Texas Tech, the picture, and the double T. These are all set in their respective corners, correctly spaced (for the most part). The four other elements on the card however, were very misaligned. This was the masked rider logo, and the three lines of text.  In the new card, everything is aligned, with a visual connection with something else on the page. The picture and all the text is right aligned along the same strong edge, making it look clean. I decided to cut the double T in half, because it is symmetrical and so easily recognized,  and I felt that it would still be the same without taking up all the space. The crest is perfectly centered, and has the same distance from both the edge of double T and the edge of the picture.

Proximity – This was a big problem in the original design, there were three different lines of text, all placed in different places on the card. The name and student were not placed close enough together to act as a unit, and the R number was off by itself, centered at the bottom of the card. In the redesign I placed them all together, stacked, to allow them to work together as one cluster of information. All the data the card has to offer is now in a single location, easing its use.

Any constructive criticism will be greatly appreciated and acknowledged, because I am already planning what changes I could make to further improve it when I gain better skills at photo editing.

6 comments:

  1. WOW! That looks so much better! And it's different than just doing a business card! Good job! I'll comment more later for Sunday's post assignment.

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  2. Like I already said, I really like your redesign. Rhetorically, by placing such a big school logo on the ID it really makes you [the student] feel like part of the university, like you 'belong' to a respected community. Cognitively, it is efficient at giving all the necessary information in a logical way. It is also affective by making the student feel like they 'belong.'

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  3. Great redesign of the Tech ID! I really like how you were able to incorporate the Double T, Texas Tech Coat of Arms and Texas Tech School colors in this design.

    This design hits on all four principles mentioned in Williams book as well as the three principles of Rhetorical, cognitive and affective.

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  4. A very good redesign of the original. I think the double T is a good substitute of the masked rider. I think that the double T is a better known logo and symbol and, therefore, deserves that spot. The coat of arms is also a nice addition of texas tech pride to the card.

    The inclusion of Texas Tech's catch phrase is a great rhetorical component. The cognitive aspect, in my opinion, is good but I think that the student i.d. info should be spotlighted more.

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  5. Felipe:

    I enjoyed reviewing your first re/design. This was a good first assignment for you in a number of ways. Might work to make more clear how you're addressing key points that I'm looking for, as discussed during class. I'll offer notes here, and a grade that can be accessed through Moodle by clicking on grades at the top of http://richrice.com/3369. Some notes:

    - The four main concepts in the course include CONTRAST, REPETITION, ALIGNMENT, and PROXIMITY (see Williams page 13)

    - Contrast refers to making things different on the artifact, not merely similar; need to use the red to your advantage more (it does not separate the content any); name could be identified in bold

    - Repetition includes repeating visual elements throughout the piece;

    - Alignment says that nothing should be arbitrary; I like what you've done with the double-T, and it's something I've done on files as well, but it against TTU's design policy guidelines, which we looked at during Thursday's class

    - Proximity suggests grouping and proximity for visual units; too many logos (two) here, need to make one featured and one small if you're going to use two

    If you have questions, please offer them via email so that I don't miss them, or in a future blog post. I may miss comments in your blogs. This is the first of five re/designs. You may choose to revise and resubmit any or all of them in your ePortfolio for a review assessment.

    Dr. Rice

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  6. I think the rhetorical purpose of the ID might have been missed in this design. I loved the design with the red and black colors, but then I thought to myself, "Wait, isn't the purpose of the ID to get relevant date from it, i.e. R number, name, and photo?" I think your design is great, but you could do a better job making the relevant details "pop", and thus, improve what the ID is meant to do. Just my take on it.

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